Music magazine mock up

Analysis of work:

This is a mock up front cover for my music magazine, i think that i need to change the picture to a different model as i don't think my model looks like a music star at the moment. I also need to change the sizes of different words as more important names in the cover lines need to be larger and bolder which will make them names stand out more and give them a more important look to them which is good as if the names are more eye-catching people will see them names and if they are fans will want to buy the magazine to read about the music artist.